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THE LONG HOME
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Estimated duration
615s
Location
HARDIN’S
Time of day
BACK YARD - DAY
Characters
LIPSCOMB, WINER, HARDIN
A high sun bakes the valley. As Winer and Lipscomb work, the school bus once again drops Amber off. Winer once again watches. LATER Amber is back in place on the back porch, dressed again in shorts and wearing sunglasses. 39. -- 40 of 109 -- MUSIC from the radio drifts through the open window. Amid the construction work, Lipscomb pauses to remove his shirt. -- 41 of 109 -- By this time, Hardin has reached the corner of the house. He watches Lipscomb cross back to the construction site in great, loping steps, extravagantly mimicking masturbation. -- 42 of 109 -- -- 43 of 109 -- -- 44 of 109 --
LIPSCOMB
(to Winer) She’s got a case on one of us, and somehow I just don’t believe it’s you. He turns back to work and drops his hammer as a clumsy excuse to bend and look up Amber’s shorts.
LIPSCOMB
(standing up) Black drawers. Godadmighty damn. Black drawers. Suddenly, Hardin comes out onto the porch and sits down next to Amber. Ignoring her now, Lipscomb goes back to hammering, gearing it up a notch or two. LATER From the edge of the property, by the stream, Amber appears in a bathing suit, drying herself off with a towel. She passes Winer and Lipscomb on her way into the house. Once she’s gone, Lipscomb lays his hammer down.
LIPSCOMB
If that ain’t a invite, then I don’t know one. Here goes nothin’. He crosses to Amber’s window and peers inside, watching her change. From where he’s standing, Winer can see Hardin approach around the other side of the house.
WINER
(calling) Hey! Lipscomb ignores him as he stares through the window.
WINER
(calling) Hey, Lipscomb! Lipscomb turns from the window like a staggering drunk and wipes imaginary beads of perspiration from his brow.
LIPSCOMB
Oh, Lord. Oh Lordy Lord... 40.
HARDIN
How high a fever you run with the fits? You reckon I ought to send that boy after Doc Ratcliff for you? Lipscomb stumbles and turns toward Hardin, his face blood- swollen.
LIPSCOMB
There ain’t nothin’ wrong with me.
HARDIN
The hell there’s not... You wanna step ‘round here a minute? I need a word with you. Glancing at Winer, Lipscomb disappears with Hardin around the side of the house. Winer continues to work as they’re gone, looking up every few moments as if expecting to hear a gunshot. Finally, Lipscomb re-appears alone and, still red- faced, begins gathering his TOOLS.
LIPSCOMB
Get your shit gathered up. We’re draggin’ up.
WINER
(pausing) What?
LIPSCOMB
We’re quittin’, by God. We’re goin’.
WINER
‘We,’ hell - I didn’t know we came in a set like salt and pepper shakers. Lipscomb straightens up and glares at him.
LIPSCOMB
Why, you snotty little bastard...
WINER
(cutting him off) I’ll make up my own mind about quittin’. You never hired me. 41.
LIPSCOMB
I ought to just slap the hell out of you.
WINER
Why don’t you, just like you did Hardin?
LIPSCOMB
(taking a step toward him) By God, I believe I will... Holding his hammer, Winer does not retreat. Lipscomb finally stops and his eyes grow fierce and malignant. Grabbing his toolbox, he begins to leave.
LIPSCOMB
I’d like to stay and see the mess you’ll make out of things. You couldn’t build a fuckin’ chicken coop if you had a book to go by. He leaves. Winer goes back to hammering as before. LATER Winer’s still hammering as Hardin saunters up, pairing his finger nails with the bone-handled knife.
HARDIN
Well, I had to let ye runnin’ mate go... I couldn’t afford union scale for winder-peepin’. Winer continues to work.
HARDIN
Hold up a minute. You ain’t gettin’ paid by the nail nohow. Winer stops and looks at Hardin.
HARDIN
Ain’t you worked past quittin’ time anyhow?
WINER
I don’t know. I don’t have a watch - we used his. Besides, I wasn’t sure what you wanted. 42.
HARDIN
I told you what I wanted when I hired you. I want a honkytonk built. Can you do it?
WINER
Well, I can do most of it. There’s some thing’s that’re hard for one man to do, like puttin’ up the joists and rafters. And I can’t raise the walls and plumb them by myself.
HARDIN
That’s all I wanted to hear. You measure ‘em and nail ‘em together, and I’ll grab a handful of these highbinders I’m always waist-deep in, and we’ll raise ‘em for you. Just holler. Alright?
WINER
I’ll give it a try.
HARDIN
Shore you will. You can do it. (a beat) Ain’t you goin’ to ast me about the money?
WINER
What about it?
HARDIN
About how much I was payin’ him? I’m payin’ it to you, now. You’re the architect and the carpenter and the hired help, too. You fuck up, we’ll know who to blame it on. Winer grins.
HARDIN
Come on, and I’ll run you home. Can’t have my builder walkin’ to work, totin’ his tools. Folks’ll be talkin’ about me. Still grinning, Winer follows Hardin to the house. 43.
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